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Need Editor for 3,658 word Non consent/Incest Story

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Salacious_Scribe
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I wrote a story where trouble has been brewing between a son and his mom. They get into an argument and he ends up sodomizing her and then forcing her to blow him. This story was published on another site, but as it's currently written it won't be allowed here.

I need someone familiar with the non con rules here to tell me what I need to change so the mods will post it.
Why, no, I don't suffer from insanity. I enjoy every fucking minute of it.


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laura
Mana wahine
Change the consent. Simple.
Salacious_Scribe
Rookie Scribe
So then it would be mom and son argue and he smacks her across the face and she willingly lets her son fuck her ass. Not even porn flicks are that poorly written.
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TangerineSky
Baked Orange
Yes, changing a violent non-consent story to represent two totally willing partners would be quite drastic. Perhaps post your more tame stories here?
Liz
Scarlet Seductress
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So then it would be mom and son argue and he smacks her across the face and she willingly lets her son fuck her ass. Not even porn flicks are that poorly written.


The mom could get abducted by aliens as she’s going to bed and just before she’s subjected to the mandatory anal probing, one of the aliens leans down and whispers. It’s her son who snuck on board to rescue her, and is currently in disguise dressed in the skin of an alien he took out with a swift karate chop to the neck and a merciful dispatch with his trusty Swiss Army Knife. He has to make it look good to get them out of there so she agrees to let him give her a good poking. When they’re done he gives the little fat one a roundhouse to the temple and they make good their escape through a teleportation device.
ScreamQueen
living dead girl
Quote by Liz


The mom could get abducted by aliens as she’s going to bed and just before she’s subjected to the mandatory anal probing, one of the aliens leans down and whispers. It’s her son who snuck on board to rescue her, and is currently in disguise dressed in the skin of an alien he took out with a swift karate chop to the neck and a merciful dispatch with his trusty Swiss Army Knife. He has to make it look good to get them out of there so she agrees to let him give her a good poking. When they’re done he gives the little fat one a roundhouse to the temple and they make good their escape through a teleportation device.



Sounds like some sort of x rated Rick and Morty ?


Just some advice
You should probably just not write that story
and focus on less violent demeaning to women stories?
WellMadeMale
Constant Gardener
Quote by Salacious_Scribe
So then it would be mom and son argue and he smacks her across the face and she willingly lets her son fuck her ass. Not even porn flicks are that poorly written.


Ever wonder why you never see mainline porn flicks that actually broach the subject of real non-step father/mother/sister/son/brother/daughter fornication? Because the concept is inherently repulsive to the majority of their viewing/renting/buying audience. You're just not going to see Uncle/niece or nephew - Aunt/nephew or niece - Grandparent/grandchild flicks anymore than you'll see actual familial sibling on sibling, father/child or mother/child - themed movies.

I've seen a lot of the themes of mainline porn over the last ten years - and you or I won't see any depictions of between actual family members who are biologically related to one another. There is one plain as day reason why even mainstream porn won't go down that road.

And yes, at least 50% of porn flicks available to watch on the 'net - are still plot hole riddled. The ones that are most silly are the false-incestuous -- "I tricked my virgin step-sister into fucking me" or "My horny step-aunt swallowed my 10 inch python" or "Step-mum and step-sister bang me to rejuvenate me - while I recuperated from heat-stroke' type of schlock.

Vanessa's suggestion is valid. Additionally, you're probably not going to be able to edit your existing masterpiece to enable it to be shoehorned into the Lush library of published stories. So just write a new 9000 word incestuous triumph that doesn't sound insipidly deranged as you're piecing out how your protagonists harden their soft parts.
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