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The Initiation

"She didn't know that it was pleasant to obey..."

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The Initiation - Chapter 1: The Invitation

The golden envelope felt heavy in her hands, its elegant cursive lettering spelling out her name: Evelyn Carter. She ran her fingers over the embossed seal, shaped like an intricate key. The invitation had arrived without explanation, slipped under her apartment door in the middle of the night.

She should have been suspicious. Any normal woman would have been. But Evelyn wasn't normal. Not entirely. Beneath her polite smiles and composed demeanor, there was a hunger she had never dared to acknowledge. A longing she barely understood herself.

The card inside contained nothing but an address and a time: Midnight. Tonight. No name, no instructions, just the silent promise of something clandestine, something forbidden.

She knew she should ignore it. But she wouldn’t.

The mansion stood at the edge of the city, hidden behind towering iron gates. The air smelled of jasmine and something darker, muskier. A black-masked valet greeted her at the door, his gaze sweeping over her bare shoulders and the modest black dress she had chosen.

“Your invitation?”

Evelyn handed him the envelope with slightly trembling fingers. The valet inspected it, then stepped aside. “Welcome to The House.”

She stepped inside, and the world shifted.

The entrance hall was dimly lit, the walls lined with flickering candles. A murmur of voices echoed from the rooms beyond—soft laughter, low moans.

A woman in a deep red gown approached, her dark eyes appraising Evelyn with interest. “You must be new.”

Evelyn swallowed. “Yes.”

The woman smiled knowingly. “Follow me.”

The inner chamber was vast and opulent, filled with velvet furnishings and gilded mirrors. People moved like shadows, some half-dressed, others completely bare. Evelyn’s pulse quickened.

She wasn’t sure what she had expected. Certainly not this.

The woman, her guide, gestured toward a golden mask resting on a nearby table. “Put this on. It’s tradition for newcomers.”

Evelyn hesitated, then lifted the mask to her face.

The woman leaned in, her breath warm against Evelyn’s ear. “There are rules. One: once you enter, you don’t leave until the night is over. Two: you must obey the hosts. And Three:” she paused, fingers grazing the delicate lace of Evelyn’s neckline. “If you stay, it means you’re ready.”

A shiver ran down Evelyn’s spine. Ready for what?

She would soon find out.

Chapter 2: The First Test

Evelyn’s pulse hammered in her throat as she stood in the dimly lit chamber, her golden mask cool against her heated skin. The air was thick with the scent of expensive perfume, sweat, and something darker, something primal.

The woman in the red gown circled her slowly, like a predator assessing its prey. Others in the room had turned their attention toward her, their masked faces unreadable. A sense of anticipation crackled in the air.

“You stayed,” the woman murmured, brushing a strand of hair from Evelyn’s neck. “That means you’re ready.”

Evelyn swallowed hard. “Ready for what?”

The woman only smiled.

A man stepped forward from the shadows, tall, broad-shouldered, and dressed in a perfectly tailored black suit. His mask was made of onyx, covering the upper half of his face, leaving only his strong jawline and full lips visible. He radiated authority, the kind that made Evelyn’s stomach tighten with something dangerously close to excitement.

“She’s new,” the woman said, tilting her head toward Evelyn. “You should be the one to introduce her properly.”

The man studied Evelyn for a long moment, then extended a gloved hand. “Come.”

She hesitated. This was the moment, the point of no return.

But instead of fear, she felt a thrill race through her veins.

She placed her hand in his.

The man led her toward the center of the room, where a velvet chaise lounge awaited. The others closed in, forming a silent, expectant circle. Evelyn could feel their gazes burning into her skin.

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He turned to her, voice low and commanding. “You follow my instructions. No hesitation. No refusal.”

A challenge. A test.

Evelyn nodded.

The man’s lips curled into something resembling approval. “Good girl.”

The first touch was electric, sending a shiver down her spine. She barely had time to process it before another pair of hands joined in. And another.

Five men.

Five masked figures surrounding her.

The initiation had begun.

Chapter 3: Submission

Evelyn’s breath hitched as strong hands guided her down onto the velvet chaise. The room felt smaller now, the air thick with expectation. She was surrounded: Five men, each masked, each watching her with the same quiet hunger.

Her body tensed, her mind screaming that she should be afraid. But beneath that fear was something else. Something darker. Something that made her thighs press together involuntarily.

The man in the black suit, her guide, her master for the night, stood over her, his fingers grazing her jaw, tilting her chin upward. “Do you know why you’re here?”

Evelyn swallowed hard. “To obey.”

A satisfied smirk. “Good girl.”

The others moved in. Hands, so many hands, brushed against her, traced the curves of her body, teased her skin through the fabric of her dress. She gasped as one of them, taller, broader, fisted a hand in her hair, pulling her head back just enough to expose the delicate line of her throat.

“You came here willingly,” another voice murmured against her ear. “But are you truly ready?”

She barely had time to answer before the first sharp snap of a belt being unbuckled echoed through the room.

Evelyn’s heart pounded.

There was no turning back now.

Chapter 4: Broken In

Evelyn’s world had shrunk to the heat of bodies pressing against her, the firm grip of hands exploring, claiming. She was no longer just an observer in this secret world; she was at its center, the offering, the prize.

Her black dress was slipped from her shoulders, pooling at her waist, leaving her bare before them. A shiver ran through her, not from fear, but from anticipation.

The man in the black suit, her guide, her master for the night, tilted her chin up, his gloved fingers pressing into her skin. “You still have the chance to walk away.”

But they both knew she wouldn’t.

She parted her lips, breath shaky. “I’m not leaving.”

A slow, approving smirk. “Then let’s begin.”

The first touch was gentle, almost teasing, a contrast to the raw intensity that filled the room. But it didn’t stay gentle for long.

They were five. She was one. And tonight, she belonged to them.

Chapter 5: Complete Surrender

Evelyn’s body trembled, caught between pleasure and submission, between the overwhelming presence of five dominant figures and the heat pooling deep inside her. She had entered this place a curious outsider, but now… now she was something else entirely.

Her mind blurred, lost in the intensity of the moment. Every touch, every whispered command, every firm grip against her skin sent another wave of desire coursing through her. There was no hesitation left—only surrender.

The man in the black suit, her master for the night, grasped her chin, forcing her gaze upward. “Look at me.”

Her lashes fluttered; breath ragged as she met his dark, unreadable eyes through his mask.

“You belong to us now.”

The words sent a final shudder through her, sealing her fate. Evelyn wasn’t just passing through this world of shadowed desires; she was part of it now. And she never wanted to leave.

As the night stretched on, the only sounds in the chamber were moans, murmured commands, and the sharp crackle of pleasure breaking through the air.

She had come here seeking answers.

She had found something far more dangerous.

Herself.

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