This is my most recent story. I'm a new-ish writer (for fiction) and I've avoided promoting anything I've done before, but the early reaction to my most recent story has been positive and given me the courage to try to draw some eyeballs to it 
I welcome (and request!) all feedback, including criticisms (be kind, but honest!) because I'm genuinely looking for ways to improve, and that includes figuring out what elements people respond to and which don't resonate at all.
It's a long story (8000 words!) so I want to thank anyone in advance who carves out a part of their day to read it. Thank you!
https://www.weihailove.com/stories/first-time/i-wont-forget-you
I Won't Forget You
He expected her to change him. She didn’t expect he’d change her.
First Time