Please indicate your level of English training in the poll above, and let me know your thoughts/experiences on this topic.
I noticed that you had edited my story. I consider myself to be an expert user of the English language. However, I agree with ChrisPowell68's assessment. When I'm writing erotica, it's a different situation. I am seeing the story play out in my head, and I often don't pay as much attention to the grammar as I do when I write at work. In fact, when I saw the edits you made to my story, on each one, I thought to myself, "Oh yeah. I shouldda caught that!"
I appreciate the edits and don't disagree with a single one of them.