You Will Be Controlled and Humiliated
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You are an intelligent, independent woman...but you fantasize about being controlled by an older man. Needing to obey Him. Performing humiliating tasks for His pleasure and amusement. Being punished for the slightest mistake or disobedience.
I’m a WM in my 50’s and I especially enjoy training women who are just beginning to explore their submissive side and are in need of some firm but gentle guidance. I will be patient with you, but I will also discipline you as you deserve.
You need not be drop-dead gorgeous or have a perfect body but I do ask that you be in reasonably good physical condition. (I’m sorry, but no big girls please.)
If interested I suggest you start by reading or listening to some of my stories here (Start with 'Teaching Carol' or the 'Bedtime Story for My Pet' series):
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And if what you find there appeals to you, send me a message and we’ll talk about what you need in your life.
Is it just my computer or does the Search function really not work very well? (Or am I not using it properly? - always a possibility.)
I was testing it out on my own material (naturally) and when I did a story search by title for "Teaching Carol" it didn't show up at all, even when I went into the category list and eliminated everything but the BDSM category, which is the one it was submitted under. Shouldn't it be at the top of the list when the title search is that specific?
And when I searched by author name (Zen Mackie) I discovered that, for example, "Authors With Username's Beginning With Z" doesn't just list names beginning with 'Z', it lists every author name that has a 'Z' in it anywhere. Wouldn't it be better to be able to type in a specific author's name and have it come up?
If I'm doing something wrong or it's some problem with my computer, that's one thing. But if this is really how the Search function is operating it seems as though it could be refined somewhat so that readers could find what they're looking for more easily.
Really like the site though - it's a wonderful place for like-minded folks to share their creativity.
I've been writing erotica for several years now, and I have to admit that I still have an issue with 'cum' as a spelling for either orgasm or the fluids that accompany it. Usually the context of any given sentence is more than enough to make clear whether someone is having an orgasm or merely arriving, so why is this separate spelling necessary?
I know it's been considered acceptable for decades but it's just one of those semi-literate terms, like 'bar-b-q', that always bothers me when it appears in an otherwise well-written sentence, particularly when it's used as a verb: 'cumming' just looks like really bad spelling to me.
If 'cum' must be used I would suggest that it be used only as a noun, to distinguish between, say, semen, and the act of having an orgasm. For example, "At long last he was coming - groaning with pleasure as he spurted again and again, covering his beloved's face with cum."
Or am I the only one who even notices this anymore? Writers and readers, over to you.