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Straight Male, 62
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Our big news for today is that our youngest daughter and her partner are moving out today, having completed the purchase of their first place yesterday. 😊 Apart from a brief false dawn in 2019, this will be the first time our house will be child-free since 1996. 😲🀣

Party. Party. Party!

I love them, really... I just prefer them in their own homes, moving on with their lives even if they have raided the bank of Mum and Dad to do so! Not sure if I have a tab, but if not, I'm standing at the bar, wallet in hand! 😳😊

Happy Father's Day to all the other dads out there, and morning/afternoon to the Rumpies in the bar. I would say put the drinks on my tab, but being a Brit, we don't have tabs; we have to go up to the bar and pay. πŸ˜• So I agree with Kat; put drinks on her tab. 😜🀣

Unlike Mother's Day, Father's Day never used to be much of a thing in the UK when I was younger. Even today, my three just send me a message wishing me well, and when I was young, we never celebrated it at all. However, though he passed two years ago, I will be raising a glass to him later today while watching the Canadian Grand Prix. 🍷

Before I add my two cents' worth, I have to state that I consider myself nothing more than a hobbyist story writer (not to the same standard as many above), who had never written anything of interest until January 2021. Then, for fun, I wrote a book, "The Alpha Man in Me". In 2022, I adapted for LS and then began posting it here, simultaneously learning grammar as I went along.

Now, two and three-quarters years later, I have found I can write stories with reasonably good grammar and sometimes β€œslightly” different plotlines. The one thing I have never had an issue with is coming up with story ideas or, luckily, finishing a story.

Here is my short story thought process…

1. Decide what genre I am writing in.

2. Look for an idea. This could come from something as simple as the cover photo or from an idea I thought of on an earlier date and had in my head or on notes.

3. Handwrite a brief story plot. This is normally nothing more than a couple of paragraphs.

4. Write the first few pages. I prefer to write from 8 am to noon, but it can be all day if words are flowing and making sense!

5. Once the first couple of pages are sensible (I find opening a story often the hardest part), I stop. Then write the closing few paragraphs.

6. I continue writing. Join the story; start with its end. This often means sex scenes are written last. I prefer stories with strong plot lines, characters and twists. Though I do sometimes write them, I am not so much of a fan of over-descriptive sex scenes.

7. It normally takes me around a week to write 5,000 sensible words and then another week to edit and polish a story into something better. This is where I feel a story comes alive. I also believe it is important not to be tempted to publish until it is done, and I mean really completed, which brings me to my final point.

8. Decide if you need to break the story into parts. Is it better to have a story of two 3,000-word parts or one story of 6,000 words? It is an issue that I don’t have the answer to, but I know a lot of readers won’t even look at a story over 3,000 words, which I find a shame.

Point 8 is probably the point I have the greatest issue with. This is because I like spending words on setting the scene. Introduce the reader to the characters and the worlds I create, and then try to make them fall in love with them before sex scenes.

Being an average writer without a huge following, I find it frustrating that points 1 and 8 probably have more influence on how many readers you have looking at your story than the words that are contained within it.

I’m not complaining, but I can back this statement by saying… I wrote one I/F story and gained 168 extra followers from it (at the time, I had around 120). I also received over 200 likes on Part 1 and well over 100 likes on each of the other 3 parts. Even today, I am asked to write more parts, which maybe I will do one day (it is nice to be asked).

Just to round up this long post. I have never binned a story or deleted one. However, I have returned to the earliest novel I posted here and edited it to improve the grammar and add cover photos.   

Congratulations, Kimmi, that is a fantastic achievement, two Omnium badges. 😊😘

Congratulations to the winners and to all those who participated. 😊

I thought the idea behind this competition was excellent, and 4,000 words gave enough scope to develop some fantastic story ideas... And so it proved... Well done, everyone. 😊

Now the results are in, and for what it is worth, here were my top three (four).

Obsolete_Fox

CuriousAnne

TheShyThespian

With Katiethewriter entry, a very strong contender.

When I judge a story, I tend to lean towards a strong storyline, but I have no issues with the chosen winners. They were alright up there in my list. In my books, everyone who enters a competition is a winner. This one was one of the best I have done, 4,000 words and a great theme.

My hat is off to Jen and her judging team. 😎

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Today is the supposed Big Reveal on the Island Getaway comp. I'm quite certain that a certain Polar Bear won't be ascending to the throne (or at least not THAT throne), but it will be interesting to see how the judges figure it out.

There were 95 entries, and I made it that 27 of them should make the top 10! 😳 So, I wish the judges good luck!

Yes, I did read all the entries and privately judge each story... and yes, I am that sad! πŸ™„πŸ€£

Blonde... that brings back memories. I didn't have a Debbie Harry poster on the wall, but I did buy their albums. 😊

We saw a Blondie tribute band a few weeks ago; they didn't play "Bang a Gong", but the timing of your post, Lion, is perfect. Even today, "Heart of Glass" and "Atomic" are in my top 25 all-time favourite tracks. 😎

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Maybe I'll give it a look. Steampunk leaves me cold for some reason, even if I've read some stuff that's kind of ancestral to it. Seems to be one of those genres with a checklist of tropes and too much of the steampunk I read seems to be about checking off items on the list. Probably I am being unfair.

Just posting again due to it not all being visible

I think you make a reasonable point, Ape. 😊 In this story, I researched what steampunk is and then introduced those elements into the story. So we've got blimps, steam, top hats and goggles, but I don't think they detract from the story. I could easily remove them, replace them with smoke and Victorian fashion and publish the story under historical.

However, the Onimium Badge says a story has to be published in every genre, so steampunk it is. I only have around 8 genres to go for that badge.

Interestingly, a little while back, I undertook a private LS survey as to which was the most popular genre to the least popular. Yes, I did count every story published. Not surprisingly, the most popular was I/F, followed by straight sex. Least popular is face sitting, followed by strap-on sex. FYI – steampunk was 4th from the bottom on that list.

I doubt much has changed in the last 6 months. 😊

I recently wrote a gay-male story, and after research, I decided that I wanted to use the word "twink".

Having no idea whether it was on the green list, grey list, or red list of naughty words, I asked privately for clarification. The advice I got was to search the published stories for that word to see if any stories included it.

That worked for me as 4 pages of stories came back... so that word was included in my story. 😊

Morning Rumpies, as Kimmi would say. 😊

I thought it was only us Brits who talked about the weather! 😎 Here is my update: where I live in the South of England, it has been dry today. Unlike the last few days, rain is on its way tonight. However, as it seems a little wet on the side of the Atlantic, and if you are looking for something to do... why not try out my new story?

Don't be put off by the fact that it is in the steampunk genre. This story is actually one of my better ones, though once again, I see it rolled through the front page in under 30 minutes. Maybe I am alone, but that always annoys me! 😈

Here is the link: The Open Purse

The Open Purse

This is a tale of intrigue, mystery and sexual discovery...

Steampunk

As part of gaining an Onium badge, I have just finished writing a story in a new genre. It's a little different. 😊

However, the story still needs a bit of a polish, and also I find myself asking burning questions – do I split this into two parts (it is already over 4k words)? Give it another twist? Leave the ending open for another day?

There are so many directions I could take these characters... I guess we all know the answer when I look to publish it next week! 😊

I see you got the good whisky out again, Bear. Must be a special occasion... or Friday! 😜😎

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Has Bear been hiding the GOOD STUFF from everyone???

Sounds like it! 😳

I love your latest polar bear image. 😎

You must have spent many hours training that polar bear to carry that flag! πŸ™„πŸ€£

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It’s Rainbow Pussy smile

This one had me smiling... and wanting to say something "witty" about your pussy! 😳🀣

Here is my new avatar, which I will use through June to support Pride month.

My pub story: last month, my wife and I attended a large Gay Pride event on Gran Canaria. It was great fun, a fabulous party. However, as a 62-year-old straight male, I learnt two things:

1). Men can have better legs than women (sorry, girls).

2). The reason why there were so many young men walking around in dog masks? That I had to google (was not brave enough to directly ask!) πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Ž

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See, that's where I am coming from. But then I look at these two stories, both coming up on two years, and the 2100 word one isn't really doing that much better than the 7k+ one. And the shorter one was a comp entry to boot so likely had a good start.

https://www.weihailove.com/stories/lesbian/letting-loose-2

https://www.weihailove.com/stories/seduction/the-girl-who-knocked

Unfortunately, both the links seem to take me to the same story, "The Girl Who Knocked".

I have found both stories; now I will read them and leave a comment.

The Girl Who Knocked

When a desperate young woman knocks on Evan's door, it kicks off a lively, lusty journey to new life and love for both

Seduction

Here is my effort, which I plan to use as my avatar through the whole of June to support Pride month. In the unlikely event of this winning, I would like the gold membership to go to an up-and-coming young author. 😊

On a different note: last month, my wife and I attended a large Gay Pride event on Gran Canaria. It was great fun, a fabulous party. However, as a 62-year-old straight male, I learnt two things:

1). Men can have better legs than women (sorry, girls).

2). The reason why there were a lot of young men walking around in dog masks? That I had to google (was not brave enough to directly ask!) πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Ž

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I am close on one but having thoughts. It's very long and I wonder if I should split it. There is a possible breakpoint. On the other hand much of the hottest stuff would fall in the second part (in fact, it would be mostly FFM and FF sex) and my experience suggests a lot will read just that for the sex and miss an important chunk of the actual story.

Seeker4, if you want people to read it, then I suggest splitting your story. There was a LushStories survey on this, which I believe said around 3,000 words was the sweet spot, and over 5,000, you lost half of your potential audience. πŸ™„

I have just submitted a follow-up gay male story, which will be published 9 months later than I originally promised. Or looking a it more positively, perfectly timed for Pride month. 😊

There are some good suggestions here. Most of my ideas come to me in my sleep, and I try to scribble them down on paper before they disappear in the morning. πŸ™„

On stories, I like to concentrate on the characters, then the start and the ending, before I look to flesh out the complete storyline. 😊

Thank you for opening up and providing the music, fuzzy. 😊

Queen is one of my favourite bands; 70s 80s = my youth! πŸ™„πŸ˜Ž

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My childhood friend’s sister passed away and they didn’t know for a couple of days. When they hadn’t heard from her they did a wellness check and found her. My heart hurts a little since she is only five years older than me and she was always so nice to me. She had mental health issues and she avoided doctors even though she had high blood pressure. Sad that she died alone.

Sorry to hear about your childhood friend's sister passing, Kat. On a happier note, I now know where Mackinaw City is. Isn't that the place always foggy due to the cold Great Lakes? πŸ™„

Thank you for getting the pub open, James.

Currently, it's a little windy and dull over here in the south of England. So a nice coffee would go down nicely. 😊

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That's it. cancel the rest of your holidays for 2025. 2026 too. now get your ass to work, pronto. Thus have i spoken! 😎

😳🀣🀣 No holidays need to be cancelled, Rachel.

I have now achieved my goal of reading and liking all 82 current stories, and I have commented on all but two of them. Now feeling slightly smug! πŸ™„ 😎

I go away for a 4-day holiday, having read every competition entry, and when I return, I find another 14 have appeared! πŸ™„

Seriously, it's good to see so many entries; I make it 78 so far. 😎