So then it would be mom and son argue and he smacks her across the face and she willingly lets her son fuck her ass. Not even porn flicks are that poorly written.
I wrote a story where trouble has been brewing between a son and his mom. They get into an argument and he ends up sodomizing her and then forcing her to blow him. This story was published on another site, but as it's currently written it won't be allowed here.
I need someone familiar with the non con rules here to tell me what I need to change so the mods will post it.
What your describing is called nuzzling.
nuz·zle
/ˈnəzəl/
verb
gerund or present participle: nuzzling
rub or push against gently with the nose and mouth.
"he nuzzled her hair"
I know using lyrics and fanfic is not allowed, but can I use sentences like the ones below...
She loved Game of Thrones.
he was dressed like a Dothraki warrior and sat there drinking from a bloody goats head.
I decided to watch a movie I never heard of before called Wild Things.
Thanks for your help.
Sal
I am writing a serial about a cheer leading squad from Hawaii who turns to the worlds oldest profession to raise money. One scene I am trying to write is a golf foursome who hire four of the girls to caddy for them.
Part of the deal is that each girl can only wear 15 items.
The lowest scoring golfer gets to personally strip two items of clothing from the highest scoring golfers caddy, and one item from the other two caddys.
Of course there are side bets for additional items of clothing.
I need someone who knows golf to read the story, suggest dialogue, and side bets, as well as terminology and jargon and make sure I'm don't sound totally ignorant about golf, which I am.
So far, I've written about 4900 words and they just teed off for hole four.
The golf course is privately owned by a fictional golf equipment manufacturer called Tropix Stix. They are trying to convinvce a young golfer who just qualified for the PGA to let them sponsor him. So the glofers are
Buck recently qualified for the upcoming PGA tour.
Chipper his agent
Vitali CEO of Tropix Stix
Doc Johnson an older plastic surgeon and majority shareholder of Tropix Stix
The caddys are
Bree (chipper) sereotypical cheerleader brunette
Sasha (Buck) a thicc black queen
Lucinda (Doc) a bootylicious Latina
Kailani (Vitali) a gorgeous Polynesian
Any and all help is appreciated.
I have been writing stories and posting elsewhere for over a decade. I just discovered Lush and plan on uploading all my stories here eventually, once I make some revisions to fix spelling errors.
